I want to be ready for a competiton thats is happening March 13, and my category is animation... please look at what i've done so far and give feedback on where I need to change things..... here's the link to what I have done so far....

thank you in advance for the good advice

http://filebox.me/files/juefrc9mv_the_s ... assins.swf

loner

Your are right, wrong section. (this should be in the Animation/Short section).



And Wtf with that anim, i like the ship thats all.


I couldnt understand the animation, the stick construction was just bad like the history the backgrounds, the effects and the particles.


You shall improve before make this.

It was average.